Week Three: Feedback From Interim Presentation

Unclear message in first design as the text says that homelessness is not a black and white issue, when really it is.

Second design does communicate the message but is very boring and an expected approach using houses as part of an infographic.

Third design is the most effective as it has some sense of movement, but is too general andneeds to be more specific.

Fourth design it is not clear enough  that the cardboard is part of a box, again too much text and the house shape is unecessary.

All the designs rely heavily on the text, they should be focused more on the image instead.

To move forward try looking at things that people associate with their homes e.g. house plants, clothing, toothbrushes etc. Choose a more specific topic: Homeless people living in cars.